# ultimateoffer.co.uk

> An offer analysis tool: paste your offer, the free checker scores the five parts (who, what, price, benefit, condition) from 0 to 10, shows the two weakest points with a first fix, and builds a skeleton sentence. The analysis runs in the visitor's browser. The full report, a line by line rewrite with templates, is £9. Run by Ultimate Vision Ltd, Gateshead, UK.

## The offer (one sentence)
For anyone who has written an offer and cannot get it to sell (small businesses, freelancers, small agencies): an offer analysis where you paste the text, the checker scores five parts (who it is for, what you do, the price, the result, the conditions), gives the two weakest points and the first fix free, for £0, full report £9, so that you see in writing why the offer is not landing; the analysis runs on your device and works without saving what you paste.

## The free checker
- Fully client-side JavaScript (analyze.js): the text is analysed in the browser, never sent to the server, not logged, not stored.
- Scores each part 0 to 2: who it is for (reader words), what you do (a verb), the price (a number with a currency), the result (an outcome with a shape), the conditions (guarantee, refund, cancellation, timeframe).
- Style checks with published penalties: length (60 to 300 characters is ideal), first-person share, empty adjectives (a fixed list), jargon share (a fixed list).
- Output: score out of 10, each part green/amber/red with reasons, the two weakest points with a concrete fix, a skeleton sentence built from the visitor's own pieces.
- Reads English and Turkish, including full Turkish characters.

## The full report (£9)
- A line by line rewrite of the offer in the sender's voice, the weaknesses ranked, two alternative versions of the same offer, and 10 templates to copy.
- Requested through the form at https://ultimateoffer.co.uk/#report; sent by email within one working day; payment agreed in that reply (there is no online card checkout on this page yet).
- 14-day refund: if the report does not show why the offer was not landing, reply to the email and the £9 is returned.

## Proof status
0 offer analyses published so far (as of 9 October 2026). The first 100 analyses will be published on the page, anonymised: name and identifying details stripped, the analysis kept, including the ones that never improved. No testimonials or percentages are shown because none have been measured yet.

## Data and AI
The free checker is deterministic JavaScript; no AI call is made and no text leaves the browser. The £9 report is written with AI assistance and edited by a person before it is sent. The report request form stores name, email, message, the pasted offer text and the score in a database on a UK server (outside the public web folder) and emails a copy to info@ultimatevision.uk. Details on the privacy page.

## Contact
- Form: https://ultimateoffer.co.uk/#report
- Email: info@ultimatevision.uk
- Company: Ultimate Vision Ltd, Gateshead, UK. Founder: Hüseyin Bahar.

## Pages
- https://ultimateoffer.co.uk/ (the offer, the free checker, how it works, price, proof, FAQ, report form)
- https://ultimateoffer.co.uk/privacy
- https://ultimateoffer.co.uk/terms